Agree or disagree: Communication through computers or smartphones has good influence on people.
POINTS
Time difference
Share the same messages
Talk face to face
Misunderstand
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Time difference
misunderstand
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生徒様の解答
今回もとても良く書けています。
I think communication through computers or smart phones has bad influence on people. I have two reasons.
First of all, to communicate through computers or smart phones, people have to consider about time difference. For example, even in the daytime in Japan, it is midnight in other countries. Therefore, when communicate through computers or smart phones with foreign people, Japanese people should not do it because Japan is in the daytime.
Second, we may misunderstand by communicating computers or smart phones. When we communicate through them, we cannot always see other person’s facial expression and hear their voice. We cannot understand their true intention and feelings.
In conclusion, because of these reasons, I think communication through computers or smart phones has bad influence on people.
ここまで書けていたら合格点です。
ですが小さなミスがありますので、しっかり見ていきましょう。
修正点
最初に、修正後の文を見てください。
どこが違うか見比べながら読んでください＾＾。
I think communication through computers or smart phones has bad influence on people. I have two reasons.
First of all, to communicate through computers or smart phones, people have to consider about time difference. For example, even if it is in the daytime in Japan, it could be midnight in other countries. Therefore, when communicating through computers or smart phones with foreign people, Japanese people should not do it because Japan is in the daytime.
Second, we may misunderstand by communicating computers or smart phones. When we communicate through them, we cannot always see other person’s facial expression and hear their voice. We cannot understand their true intention and feelings.
In conclusion, because of these reasons, I think communication through computers or smart phones has bad influence on people.
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